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Posted:Oct 10, 2015 4:05 pm
Last Updated:Apr 6, 2019 1:12 am
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"It's Personal."

If you have something you would like to tell or ask me, why not post a comment here? This thread is set for me to review comments before they appear. They're just between you and me. Well I might read them out loud and they could be overheard by my pets.

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I recommend everyone have a blog so that others can contact them.

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Explaining My Poetry Style
Posted:Mar 14, 2018 9:39 pm
Last Updated:Mar 23, 2019 8:12 pm
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Critical Poetry Thoughts

Someone criticized my poetry,
He said he could not understand it
He said that it did not make sense
He said that it is kind of juvenile
As I make it like a conversation.

Oh really well let me tell you what I really think!
I don't really know why I write poetry this way.
I just began and it is hard to change.

This person suggested I need to add description
That I had to add visuals
That I had to describe the senses
That I had to let people feel for themselves
And not tell them only how I feel.

But like a zebra
If I were to be covered in white paint
Eventually the stripes would reappear
As the paint would fade.

Nature has many an animal that has spots
Supposedly they cannot change them
Should I count myself in their kingdom?
But I have many more facets as I am a human.

Oh then there is that lizard
Made famous by Boy George and Culture Club,
Come on and sing it!
I know you want to!
quot;Karma, Karma, Karma, Karma, Chameleon".
Its skin changes with its surroundings.
Oh were I that adaptable!
Perhaps some day I will be.

But now that I have vented,
Now that my pot has gone from boiling to simmering,
I will just tell myself in a soft whisper.
It is all good.
It is actually constructive criticism.
It is just an added piece of wisdom
To which I can pick at as I please.

I may one day write a poem with just imagery.
I may one day write a poem that does not voice,
the way I speak,
I may one day write a poem that does not rhyme at all.
Who would I be then?
Would I still be me?
Oh seriously,
I am not that dense
I am just going through the motions
Until this poem ends.
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We Could Have Some Fun A Poem
Posted:Apr 19, 2019 12:33 am
Last Updated:Apr 19, 2019 12:35 am
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I think we could have fun.
I think we have the stuff
To make some moments
Ones to treasure
Filled with laughs
As well as pleasure.

We already have a good start
I made you laugh
At something I did
You made a joke about it
I did laugh out loud
But you said you wouldn't
Bring it up again
As it was embarrassing.

Time will tell
If we get to do more
Than just talk
You got that right
If we get to make
Things happen
If we get to take action.

In the meantime,
Let's keep chatting.
I appreciate our conversations
And like I said
We do have some laughs
Keep them coming
And add some other things.
I will give you a hint
It's what pleasure brings.
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Finding An Extraordinary Lover A Poem
Posted:Apr 18, 2019 11:21 pm
Last Updated:Apr 18, 2019 11:40 pm
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Finding an extraordinary lover
One who does it all
Whose smile
Makes my heart flutter
Whose voice
Sends shivers
Down my spine
And my hairs stand on end.
Yes, where do I find him?

Would that I could
Make a report
For such a missing person.
Where would I place
That notice?
What newspaper?
Or is there a site
That is electronic
Whose reach is broader?

Silly to seek
The extraordinary.
Why can't I settle
For someone normal
Who gives me just enough
Because I will tell you
That is too little
To keep my interest.

He has to be a world above!
Be the man of my dreams
Or engender them!
Make me believe that
Dreams come true
Just by being with him.
It won't take moving mountains
Just giving me thrills
With his actions
His smiles.
His voice
His choice
To be with me
And put me first.
Yes, that last statement
Might be of the greatest importance.
A man who gives me
And sees to my needs
Like they are his fondest goals
To achieve.
Ah yes! that would make
Such a lover extraordinary!
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Internet Dating Site Profiles A Poem
Posted:Apr 16, 2019 8:14 pm
Last Updated:Apr 19, 2019 12:45 am
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Internet Dating Site Profiles
Written in 20

What to write
About myself
On an internet dating site.
What to say
So as not to sound
Too self absorbed.
What can I get
Away with
Without sounding
Too pretentious
Or conversely
Not sound
Like I am lacking
In confidence.
That is the dilemma
In a nutshell.

It could be simple
Or it could be complex.
I could write seemingly
Matter of fact,
Or I could write
In a humorous way
To elicit laughs.

I could write suggestively
But who would I attract?
I am not one to post
Too many photos.
As I am so not photogenic.

It all comes down to
Making changes
And re-writing
If there is little success.
For whomever tells you
Their profile is perfect
Well they are full of...
Beeswax.

Speaking of bees
Do I have to
Offer them honey
So they will come to me?
For I sure as heck
Am not offering that
As I am not
Quite that desperate!
Yet!
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The Way To My Heart A Poem
Posted:Apr 15, 2019 7:13 pm
Last Updated:Apr 19, 2019 9:50 am
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I mentioned I liked flowers
So you brought me some
When we first met.
The weeks have passed
And the flowers have wilted.
I am now going to have
To do the sad task
Of getting rid of them.

I thought of putting
The roses in a book
Save a few
For a remembrance.
It would mean
That I think of you
As special
And deserving
Of reverence.

Maybe I am getting ahead
Of everything
I do have that tendency.
But in all honesty
Flowers bring out
The best in me.

The way to my heart
Besides words and deeds
Would have flowers
Given as tokens
Of affection.
So there you have it.
If you can follow directions.
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Make My Doubts Subside A Poem
Posted:Apr 14, 2019 1:52 am
Last Updated:Apr 16, 2019 6:49 am
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I think of him.
And I sigh.
I wish he were here
By my side.

He is not typical.
Not by far!
He has a lot
To tell me
That offers
Quite the surprise.

I want to be patient.
But patience escapes me
As I think of possibilities.
Especially that he has
Found me lacking
In some capacity.
Or that he is enjoying
Another woman's company.

These thoughts can be
All consuming
And I just want to
Have a resolution.

My doubts speak about me
My insecurity
I don't want to advertise them
But hiding them is not easy.

Tomorrow is another day
And he may indeed
Make my fears go away
All by telling me
That I am likewise
On his mind
My doubts can thereby
Subside.
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Have A Go! A Poem
Posted:Apr 13, 2019 12:19 pm
Last Updated:Apr 18, 2019 12:02 am
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It will be a test
For both of us.
Whether either one
Of us was
Exaggerating
Our libido
And or prowess.

He says he absolutely loves
Giving oral.
I have expressed
My enthusiasm
For reciprocation.

I always laugh
When I say that
Because it is my
Wacky sense of humor.
If he sees it
Then there is one test
He has passed
With flying colors.

Now as to stamina
I can go for hours.
In fact I would love
A marathon session
Where we could be
Doing what amounts
To sexercise.
Burning calories
In the most pleasant
Of ways.
Sweat the least
Of our worries.
As we can always
Jump in the shower
And get clean
And then
Have another go
While in there
Or back in the sheets.

Oh to see if this
Is possible!
I suppose it is
Just wishful
Or for young folk.
But there is only one
Way to really know.
Let us have a go!
And then round two
And then more!
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Your Abandonment A Poem
Posted:Apr 12, 2019 9:04 pm
Last Updated:Apr 19, 2019 9:53 am
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A hole has opened in my life
In the place of our almost
Daily communication and chats.
You have chosen to
Change your status
I am far from sure
How all that happened.
I guess in your heart
Another woman
Has taken up residence.

I guess what I am feeling
Is abandonment.
Rejection of my person.
I am feeling less than.
Not that I was ever perfect.

Do I want to understand?
Do I want to know how
Your mind has changed?
Do I want to hear the good
And the bad?
Do I want to add to
My sadness by
Hearing all of this?

I have used the words before,
And so I go,
Forward and onward,
Seemingly picking up
The pieces of my heart
Like a lover picks up
Her discarded clothing
And gets dressed
After a night of passion.
But unlike that scenario
I have never had you
In real life, in person.
Not sure if that experience
Would have made my pain worse.
I shake my head
And say,that it probably would.

Have a nice day.
Have a nice life.
I wish you the best.
Now I must rest
Regroup and persevere
And look for another
Man to fill the void
Left by your abandonment.

I wrote this in 2016 for someone who professed that he loved me and then voila! he posts that he is a relationship with someone else with no warning. I am not that naive to know that an online thing is more than likely make believe but ...I had hope.
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The Magic Could Not Be Rekindled A Poem
Posted:Apr 12, 2019 1:40 am
Last Updated:Apr 13, 2019 11:58 am
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I could not rekindle the magic.
It is no longer possible
It is gone the way
Of a novelty wearing off.

That was all it was.
I will accept that verdict.
I was in on the decision
I was a principle player
I was an equal participant.

The magic we once had.
From so many years ago.
That we kept in
The back of our minds
Was it just wishful thinking
Or a mirage?

Maybe a discussion
Of our expectations
Might or could
Make a difference.
Would speaking of
Our dissatisfaction
Upset what we have left
Of our longstanding friendship?

Or is it better
To leave things unsaid?
To let things lie?
The recommencing
Of any relations
Now to be shelved.
Simply because
The magic could not
Be rekindled.
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Someone Worthy A Poem
Posted:Apr 10, 2019 9:04 pm
Last Updated:Apr 12, 2019 7:17 pm
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He is someone worthy
Of volumes
Of study
Of poetry
As he is truly
Poetry in motion.

He is fluid
But essential
Is his soul
In his interactions.
Don't dismiss it
See it!
Is it not glorious?

Do you believe me now?
That he is worthy?
That he is a treasure
To behold?
I can sing his praises.
For I have seen
Him in action.
I have felt his passion.
I have felt his elation
And I have felt his sadness.
Guess which one I want
To witness
And partake in?
I will give you a hint
One makes me smile
The other frown.
But in either case
I would be honored
To stay around
As long as he will have me.
As a friend
As a companion
I can only imagine
What being his lover
Would bring?

Satiation?
A homecoming?
Glowing
Without and within?
This I can imagine
For he is worth
So much contemplation.
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He Made Me Smile A Poem
Posted:Apr 10, 2019 6:36 pm
Last Updated:Apr 16, 2019 12:00 am
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I told him he made me smile.
It was a truthful
Simple statement.
It was indeed
Quite accurate.

The smile came to be
As I have so often
Imagined him
Speaking to me
Softly whispering
Words I have 
Longed to hear.
Words of passion
Words and breath
That arouse me
Like no one else.
And if one or two
Of those words were love
I might need to be caught
As I would almost surely
Fall backward.

I hope his arms
Would be there to catch me.
And wrap around me
To make me feel safe
And protected.
And feel that
Ever so wonderful 
Feeling...of love.
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Sayings To Get Me Through A Poem
Posted:Apr 8, 2019 11:10 pm
Last Updated:Apr 9, 2019 2:21 pm
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There is so much more in life
Than my puny broken heart
The world has so much
Turmoil and strife.
I should suck it up
Add the buttercup.
And a slogan is
Brought forth.

Introduce me to your words
The sayings that get
You through the day.
The ones you mumble
Like a mantra
Like this too, shall pass.
The serenity prayer
Uttered in it's entirety.
Don't make me write
It all out now
I could but
Would that be a bore?
It works for those who follow.

One day at a time
Moment after moment
They all add up
I am not trying to store them
I wish I could.
But they are lost
To bewilderment
As I go through the motions.

Yes I am making it
Through the day
The nights are harder
That is when my puny
Broken heart
Feels the worst.
When I am all alone
With no distractions.

Telling myself
To suck it up buttercup.
Just makes me want
To shut my mind off.
That is the place
That really has the affect.
My heart just figurative.
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