Breathing space - poem and collage  

senfully 54F
614 posts
11/4/2021 12:39 pm
Breathing space - poem and collage

Breathing space
written November 3rd, 2021

Space stretches
into the distance
I send my breath
towards you

soft like a breeze
tickling your hair
embracing you
pooling around you
making this space

for you
to be
to rest
to feel peace
a breathing space.


senfully 54F
443 posts
11/4/2021 12:39 pm

Breathing space
written November 3rd, 2021

Space stretches
into the distance
I send my breath
towards you

soft like a breeze
tickling your hair
embracing you
pooling around you
making this space

for you
to be
to rest
to feel peace
a breathing space.


senfully 54F
443 posts
11/4/2021 12:40 pm

Ages ago I made collages with clippings from magazines. Luckily magazines still exist lol. The collage came first, and then the poem.


scottv69 59M
6791 posts
11/4/2021 4:27 pm

a very nice one


69ereatwetpussy 60M
6784 posts
11/4/2021 5:06 pm

Your a breath of fresh air
A breeze off the ocean
Wind form the west
Warm and light
A gust that blows
the leaf around and around
Cold winter send a chill
thought you to the bone
all you want is to be warm
to smell what ever is in the air
as your nose follows it
see where it comes from
where would you go
if the wind to you there


kamaruhl3 61M
4988 posts
11/4/2021 5:29 pm

love this poem. and the collage is so intriguing . keep looking at each quadrant and something interesting is there


MelbLife 57M
313 posts
11/4/2021 5:44 pm

In a pause between
an exhalation and the next
the bellows of the lungs
such mechanical imagery
for the spirits we

instead a whispered caress
finer and warmer than silk
sirocco breeze swirling
addressing bare skin
erotic thoughts flower
a blooming of desire

in pause between one breath and next
the thoughts and feelings mix
drifting in the sensual calms
of the tactile dancing breath
upon collarbone and chest
a lover's touch which does not rest
brushing lightly over
in grazing tingles sent
nerve sensations tantalised
the moment in this pause
body awakened and alert
to anticipation and potential
in every single lingering breath

lean in and take the air
shared in lungs this kiss
of heat and life and desire
given to life greater meaning
in the pause between.


Shouldbe_here 59M
53 posts
11/4/2021 6:07 pm

Beautiful!!


DaddyTheKing26 27M

11/4/2021 6:08 pm

Nice


G000dbuddy 34M  
1676 posts
11/4/2021 7:27 pm

Space stretches
into the distance
I send my breath
towards you
Great lines

goodbuddy781


Vsecrets49 72M  
7 posts
11/4/2021 7:46 pm

I know where this is directed…


MrWrong4RghtNow 56M
2439 posts
11/4/2021 10:39 pm

Very cool collage. And whoever could be the recipient of your breaths would be lucky indeed.

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