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CaptNemo2000 71M  
6 posts
11/22/2021 1:08 pm

Please let me know where you will move these posting to. I'm hooked on the story and would like to see it through.

Great job of writing

Andy


Claw51478 76M
235 posts
11/22/2021 1:25 pm

No, continue editing, at least when a complete sentence is " lost to the wind " by Senior Sizzle. A word here and there does not matter to me, I have that analytical brain, that sometimes frustrates me, but, I get over it.
Here is what I just wrote to Pete.
My thoughts: A dragon has 2 hearts, maybe, as he is traveled back in time, it is a spiritual type of being, and if stayed there , he would be dead, but he transitioned back to Sara. Remember, Sara has some very extreme powers. She communicates with Daniel thru time. He may be a cat with 9 lives, maybe that is where the saying came from, just saying.

As many twist and turns, sometimes it is difficult to comprehend, that's why I re-read several parts back, so that , just in case I missed a little tid bit, I can now understand.


OlderPete58 65M  
243 posts
11/22/2021 2:16 pm

Daniel don't give up and do let us know were we can follow your thoughts and writings and yes it is an epic story something we can get our teeth in and its fun trying to follow all the twists and turns it is what makes this so immersive..

I know what Senior Sizzle is like for dropping words and the odd sentence as well as putting in the wrong characters it is not a publishing tool but it has enabled you to share your thoughts and ideas and us to follow them.

Like Claude says I go back and re-read previous episodes just to get my head around the twists and turns.

And as per CaptNemo above let me know where you move them too and if you publish let me know I should like to follow this wherever you take it.

Peter


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