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More To You. A Poem
More To You. A Poem Of course there is More to you For surely you are not One dimensional. You are complex Such a mix Of thoughts And feelings And experiences. The computations Requiring a machine So my thought processes In regard to you Doomed to failure As being inadequate. I cannot see All the parts And pieces And their mechanisms. My capacity for knowledge Of such Being limited. Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely |
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You know what I mean? Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely
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7/1/2019 5:25 am |
Hmm. Interesting view of someone
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7/1/2019 5:58 am |
Hmm. Call me immature, but I always prefer rhyming poems. I think the ideas and tone of your work could've rhymed with a little effort and been much more appealing. As such, it's only okay. Then again, I had zero expectations going in so it's better than expected. Keep trying.
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7/1/2019 6:15 am |
Hahaha, I love how some people are so small minded. Peotry doesn't have to rhyme, well unless you are use to reading Dr. Seuss. How is your capacity for knowledge limited? Just because someone else thinks you wouldn't understand?
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I know what you mean
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