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Rough Draft Of A Perfect Day A Poem  

yesmamallthetime 56F  
4466 posts
6/28/2019 10:57 pm
Rough Draft Of A Perfect Day A Poem


I think I am going to remind someone
Of what we pledged to one another
It is not something fantastic
Like a marriage vow
It is just that we promised
To share our version
Of what a perfect was.

Yes, I know such a premise
Of a writing exercise
Could be nearly a novel
If I made chapters
Of the hours.
Actions of the
From the menial tasks
Of feeding and walking
My animals.
The encounters with neighbors
And some animal friends.

The sensual activities that
A perfect would have!
From morning sex
To meeting for lunch
Playing footsie the table
Holding hands above it
When we were able.

A perfect would have
A walk around a pond or lake.
I mean it could include
Swimming if it were in season
But that might have to wait.

I want a perfect to have
Some things accomplished
A few poems written.
A finished.
Ready to be formatted.

Dinner with my handsome man
Something intimate
With soft music in the background.
The same actions as lunch
On and the table.

When we made it to the car
We kissed and kissed
Like teenagers.
Moaning and groaning.
Like we were new lovers.
But we knew in our minds
That our lovemaking was
So effing superb
And orgasmic.

I make a joke about
Not getting arrested
For indecent exposure.
We both laugh
And say in unison.
Let's go home.
Yes, to our bed
In our bedroom
With candles
And we give the morning
Something to envy
But not really
The morning is another kind of feast
Breakfast
Whereas the night
Is the main course.
The acts and it's teasing
Leading up to this
Like appetizers.

This was just to tell my friend
Remind him of our writing pledge.
I have not done it nearly
Enough justice
This is really just the tip
Of the iceberg
Perhaps a rough draft.
I need to work on it.
Isn't that really what
Perfection is made of?
Practice?
If I had this rough draft
Of a it would still be
So much better
Than one without such
Wonderful activities.

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


yesmamallthetime 56F  
11278 posts
6/28/2019 10:58 pm

Practice makes perfect. I would like to practice this kind of day...

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


billyray234 60M
759 posts
6/28/2019 10:59 pm

perfect activities


scoupe42 60M

6/29/2019 3:03 am

You have a awesome way of expression yourself. You have so much love in you!


warriorholding 58M  
115 posts
6/29/2019 5:08 am

beautiful writing


I_sportandceleb 64M

6/29/2019 6:27 am

....a great way to express oneself


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