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Ode to Sweat....  

MulleenofMelb 58M
2284 posts
2/5/2018 6:42 pm

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2/7/2018 3:01 am

Ode to Sweat....


Ode to Sweat
Sweat across my brow forms
as my pores their role performs
a wayward drop spirals falling down
splashes and evaporates on burning ground
Sun is bright and high and wind is hot
this heat unrelenting will not stop
and yet to bicycle pedals I apply my self
to try and remove this stomach shelf
so much easier to put on this damned weight
removing not as simple as sending off as freight
instead my body work as I turn a perspiring red burnish
the wheels turn only from the energy I furnish
each low hill calls on new reserves
for steeper hills no energy can I conserve
learning which gears need be set for what
and getting wrong on mid hill I sometimes stop
breathing hard grasping air from day's furnace breath
dying figuratively for a pause a drink and rest
and then I press my foot down once more
move the bicycle across the forest floor
each pedal in rhythm lifting and falling
as to my Adonis heart exercise is calling
no Narcissus I would claim to be
I just seek a fitter tauter leaner me
even as Summer Sun beats me down
and sweat gathers heavy on my frown
the clothes I wear dampen with sweat
as in the heat directions I almost forget
a blur is all this heated world around
as this exercise torture most un-profound
character building to sweat you might state
but for my character it does not rate
self flagellation seems a useless tool
when world will freely practice on every fool
the world is hot and not all due to climate change
is of my own doing as this body I seek to change
only mad dogs and Englishmen in the noon day sun
and yet I am here bicycling as I really hate to run.



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MulleenofMelb 58M
3024 posts
2/6/2018 2:04 pm



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MulleenofMelb 58M
3024 posts
2/6/2018 2:47 am

    Quoting  :

my body will ache, perspire and collaborate to bring my work undone, and I will always try and pedal on.....and the time will come when the seasons change and here grow cold, but even then the temperature lows you know our climate will never hold

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MulleenofMelb 58M
3024 posts
2/6/2018 2:45 am

    Quoting HAMONMAN:
    Shouldn't there be a few 'thou's and 'dost's in that pome ?
Oh thou dost identify the failing
of the poetry against which railing
how canst I or should that be thou
allow such words to before you bow
then again there be no thing as bicycle
at the time when Shakespeare dost rule.

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MulleenofMelb 58M
3024 posts
2/6/2018 2:43 am

    Quoting Isttime4us:
    I have bicycled coast to coast , yosemite, coastal redwoods, sierra nevada, cascades , yellowstone , rocky mountians , kansas ,appalachian , virginia, new england.
and, abruptly, my one hour trips on the local bike paths put into perspective

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Isttime4us 64M/64F

2/5/2018 10:14 pm

I have bicycled coast to coast , yosemite, coastal redwoods, sierra nevada, cascades , yellowstone , rocky mountians , kansas ,appalachian , virginia, new england.


MulleenofMelb 58M
3024 posts
2/5/2018 8:57 pm

I just salt and water, and probably, I guess, valuable special minerals escaping the body....we all do it (I hope!)....

thanks for the comment, and hoping to keep the sweat to perspiration and not to rivers of

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MulleenofMelb 58M
3024 posts
2/5/2018 8:56 pm

    Quoting bundaberger2:
    very interesting might try this next time I ride my bike
you mean......sweating?

perhaps once I ride my bicycle long enough I shall reach a state of grace where sweating does not occur...however as it is Summer here, and the current temperature somewhere around 30c, I think the environment will soon put paid to that....

I usually find the more exercise I do, over a long period, more cleanly and freely I sweat, as the body decides for maximum exertion it needs to have in place maximum cooling. And thanks for the comment.

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bundaberger2 69M
62 posts
2/5/2018 8:43 pm

very interesting might try this next time I ride my bike


Oliver_Ford 31M

2/5/2018 7:46 pm

Interesting =)


MulleenofMelb 58M
3024 posts
2/5/2018 6:51 pm

hmmm......is yelling "Yeeeee-Hah!!!!!".....just a little to Country and Western when on my bicycle....

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MulleenofMelb 58M
3024 posts
2/5/2018 6:43 pm

a glimpse of what I do
to try and shake energy unused which does accrue
when on my seat and before laptop sit
writing out these attempts at poetic script.

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