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I Am The Ghost of Water (A Collaboration with Wildnwanton)
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I Am The Ghost of Water (A Collaboration with Wildnwanton) Does it taste like solace? Does it taste how diving to Retrieve pluck pluck like a small wet stone could be Resting against your molars, You sucking that wet hot Penny-copper taste and Feeling how smooth giving Eons of rush pound push and Dig dig the eddies pour and Isn’t the moisture of her like Standing in the damp shadows Where earth sky meet touch? And isn’t her flesh marvelous Like every evaporation dive Doesn’t the rolling riverbed of My thighs meeting you that first Night, now cast a soft like night Shadows, clouds consume moons Doesn’t it soft sound respite? Doesn’t it echo like dive touch Of a lonely ghost, crystalline Remembering skin puckering two Nipples, the cascade of wet silk Like fall leaves rustle rustle Dive devour me finally yes - Release releasing giving like The core part, engulf touch algae That is intangible consuming How you lust like succulent dive Dance of a rainstorm- isn’t it? Image: "The Ghost of Water" by Wildnwanton ----------------------------------------- Dear Gentle Readers of the Pervert Persuasion, This poem and it's partner are collaborations between fellow blogger wildnwanton and myself. Wildnwanton and I thought it might be a fun challenge to pair up some of her photography with my writings. She sent me a number of photos to review. When I saw this photo and it's partner, an idea began to form in my mind of ghosts and elements - and how fire and water are compliments as well as opposites. From there I feel as if the two poems, in a manner of speaking, just 'were.' I hope you enjoy. Please remark about the photos as well as my writing, because she works very hard and is very talented - and without these I would not have been inspired to write as I did. MT       |
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like all your other original pieces, very very good-cudos to you (you don't have a private message thingy so I will tell you here, I referenced you in my post this morning, I hope it meets your approval?) But, thanks for the thought! MT
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like all your other original pieces, very very good-cudos to you (you don't have a private message thingy so I will tell you here, I referenced you in my post this morning, I hope it meets your approval?)
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There is nothing I could possibly write to add to your words. Again, a simple thank you is the best I can manage for now.  "Shall I tell you the secret of the true scholar? It is this: every man I meet is my master in some point, and in that I learn of him." ~Ralph Waldo Emerson  
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If I did not know better, I would almost say you have a little lustful crush on me, Mr. DA sir. Thank you. You are very kind, my dear. I hope you are having a lovely week. MT
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Oh thank you Dusty. I am so glad you enjoyed. And as to quality, on some level a prideful MT will agree...but then again, no publishers so far have taken me on. Sigh. MT (trying to remain optimistic)
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Mm..indeed, it is. This is work in progress? Damn, you're scary! Thanks, Templar, sweetie. MT
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Mm..indeed, it is. This is work in progress? Damn, you're scary!
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