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You are The Ghost of Fire (A Collaboration with Wildnwanton)
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You are The Ghost of Fire (A Collaboration with Wildnwanton) Does it make you fearful, how Does it roll like banks of fire How your fingers dig dig into me Eating my flesh with your Mouth your tongue your words Now a hard hard take me hard Without you I know I would so I would lie in a frozen state With frozen limbs waiting till Hot hot burning flickering, I’d I'd wait a thousand years Yearning, for tongues<b> branding </font></b>The hard and soft skin of us, Resting against your ribcage, Releasing releasing giving like Standing in the shadows where Earth and stars collide, longing To touch your face isn’t it like We occupy one sacred space Two bodies intertwined over Space and how inevitable we Shall melt together as wax, Doesn’t it echo dance crackling As searing heat sculpts metal Emulating magna our flames our Limbs ceasing to know time, Space, or any of that rubbish Release releasing giving like The core part of me engulfing How my lust is like the burn Dance of a firestorm – isn’t it? Image: "The Ghost of Fire" by Wildnwanton ----------------------------- Dear Gentle Readers of the Pervert Persuasion, This poem and it's partner are collaborations between fellow blogger wildnwanton and myself. Wildnwanton and I thought it might be a fun challenge to pair up some of her photography with my writings. She sent me a number of photos to review. When I saw this photo and it's partner, an idea began to form in my mind of ghosts and elements - and how fire and water are compliments as well as opposites. From there I feel as if the two poems, in a manner of speaking, just 'were.' I hope you enjoy. Please remark about the photos as well as my writing, because she works very hard and is very talented - and without these I would not have been inspired to write as I did. MT       |
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Really enjoyed the poem. Responded erotically. I like fundamental images that go straight to the soul. Mr.Robin. MT
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Really enjoyed the poem. Responded erotically. I like fundamental images that go straight to the soul. Mr.Robin.
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Thank You so very much. That so simple a thing could inspire such words is amazing to me. Again, thank you. "Shall I tell you the secret of the true scholar? It is this: every man I meet is my master in some point, and in that I learn of him." ~Ralph Waldo Emerson  
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Indeed, again! These are very vivid thoughts, MT...from where do these emotions emanate?  Or something.Thank you, sweetie. I appreciate both the comments. You are too sweet. Did you by any chance see my various Saint Poems? I was thinking after NB's last comment about dominate men, and you (amongst others) came to mind. Would love to know what you think of them. MT
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You'll know me better than most people I 'know' then. Thank you, DA. Truly. XO, MT
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Very nicely written MT. I like all the heat imagery in this one and the spontaneous style too Thank you, Zen Dom. The style might seem spontaneous but I actually worked pretty hard on NOT writing as logically as I feel I usually do. Was really trying to make a sort of echo effect, to ghost words and rhythm. I know you know what I mean, sugar beet.MT PS I have been calling people 'sugar beet' recently. Dunno why.
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Thank you. High praise indeed from one such as you who is so talented at blowing up. I am very much looking forward to September 18th. MT
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Very nicely written MT. I like all the heat imagery in this one and the spontaneous style too All are welcome to an audience with The Magnificent One oldirtybacchus
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Indeed, again! These are very vivid thoughts, MT...from where do these emotions emanate?
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