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Blogs > Mariana_Trench_ > poetic disambiguation

To Impress You  

Mariana_Trench_ 50F
1974 posts
1/30/2010 12:58 pm
To Impress You
You once spoke to me briefly of some wish I had to impress you
Some notion that I had to desire to be the best, the most deserving, to
Woe you with tight-rope walking lingual hedonism…
Sure. If you want to see it that way…
And I’ll take the criticism,
I will take the abandoned moments and the vacant pause,
I’m not denying that element…
However,
You could also look at it as this: some symbiotic
Brush up against, inhale your pheromones, my god- your mind
Fucks my mind to oblivion, your brain fits just perfectly,
Oh my certainty in this is profound…
Just one of the reasons we should snatch and grab,
Claw, bite, chew, dictatorship our way…
I’m not going to deny my ego- I’ll tell anyone who matters,
And, you, I’m light headed
I am learning how to breathe deep this thin air,
I’m ready. It’s not that I don’t want to impress you…
I want to everything you.
To devour you
To caress you
To panacea you
To slumber you
To profound you
To reassemble you
To find a key for unlocking you
To rebuild- to mold- to sculpt you
To press my glistening cunt against you
To take of your mouth for an eternity,
To see who will cry out the loudest,
To taste your lips their saltiest…
To listen together to us resting the fullest, the deepest,
You get the things in me I have kept wrapped in tissue,
My china, my crystal, my priceless artifacts devalued by those many
Lacking a discerning eye-
The passerby who passed on by.

"Isabella and the Pot of Basil,"
John William Alexander
American Victorian Painter
late 19th century
Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
3/4/2010 10:20 pm
    Quoting rm_dalilad:
    It is rare to encounter someone who thinks in such strong song. Someone possibly bored with the mundane and willing to examine and reinterpret her own precious otherworldliness and then share the discoveries. You set out these rare jewels. I wonder how many of us appropriately appreciate you. I hope the person you wrote this for appreciated it and was worth it.
Dear Dali Lad,

A fan of the surrealists? For another time, that chat.

Yes. Yes. Some. Yes. In some ways, yes. He did, yes.

MT


rm_dalilad 70M
Ask me for a photo
1322 posts
3/4/2010 10:08 pm

 It is rare to encounter someone who thinks in such strong song. Someone possibly bored with the mundane and willing to examine and reinterpret her own precious otherworldliness and then share the discoveries. You set out these rare jewels. I wonder how many of us appropriately appreciate you. I hope the person you wrote this for appreciated it and was worth it.


Mariana_Trench_ 50F
4396 posts
1/31/2010 1:32 am

 Dear Mr. Wellworded,

Pithy. Hey, thank you...
Please return here often to
respond to my blog.

And you are the only
Person yet to whom I have
Replied by haiku.

Cheers,

Mariana


IrishPartyBoy 55M

1/30/2010 3:04 pm

 To quote a great writer, this one 'fucks my mind to oblivion'. Great image paired with the piece.


rm_wellworded 58M
923 posts
1/30/2010 1:47 pm

 beautiful...


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