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Blogs > justpervin29 > A dorky shy pervert's mind

Writing Exercise - Haikus  

justpervin29 50M
266 posts
11/18/2014 1:36 pm
Writing Exercise - Haikus

Lately I haven't had much time to do any writing (or typing some of the several dozen stories awaiting to be put in electronic form). So, yesterday during the last few minutes of lunch and today as I waited during my daughters dentist. appt., I decided to do a quick writing exercise and tried to work within one of the more restrictive structures I can think of, haiku.

As you probably know the traditional haiku is a three line poem based upon a 5 - 7 - 5 syllable format.

While very poor excuses of the beautiful art form haiku is I figured I would share my work;

Our bodies collide
Deep thunderous thrusts
Climaxing desires

Ache resonating
throbbing uncontrollably
I need you right now.

My mouth envelops
Lips tugging hardened nipple
Your hand cleaving me

Tendrils of fine silk
Woven within my fingers
I pull and you moan

Look into my eyes
As I enter into you
Body. Mind. Soul. All.

Backed against the wall
Here I have you, as you wish.
All of you is mine.

Your beautiful neck
is the canvas I paint.
My lips as paintbrushes.

Your legs are quaking
As I taste your ambrosia
You smother my face.

Am hoping to get some new storie typed up over the next several weeks. we will see what time and the this old noggin allows.
Smile - you never know who may need one
justpervin29 - comments are most welcomed.
rm_fit4ufor3rd 60M/63F
678 posts
11/18/2014 2:52 pm

 change the 2nd line , doesn't have 7 syllables


Oceana1969 58F  
442 posts
11/19/2014 9:44 am

 Very enjoyable to read. I like


justpervin29 replies on 12/18/2014 3:22 pm:
Thank you glad you liked and always glad you liked it. Was just a writing exercise but was fun

lovetokissplease 64F  
511 posts
12/7/2014 7:55 pm

 I like it very much! This is my favorite part,

Look into my eyes
As I enter into you
Body. Mind. Soul. All.

Very, very, sensual and sexy and hot!


justpervin29 replies on 12/18/2014 3:25 pm:
Thank you for stopping by and commenting So glad you work but liked - not my best work but was a fun way to try and push myself.

icingirl 57F
152 posts
12/12/2014 4:29 pm

 Going to take me forever to catch up. Missed your writings my dear
Make me good god, just not yet.icingirl


justpervin29 replies on 12/18/2014 3:29 pm:
Always so amazing to hear you you hun Yep have some new stuff and you know me I have a folder about 2 inches thick of other stories in various stages of completion. Hope post a new one soon. Always love hearing what you think

sweetweakness 69F  
2 posts
12/25/2014 3:43 pm

 Beautifully erotic and sensuous... as always. very imaginative and certainly hits the senses....


justpervin29 replies on 12/25/2014 6:09 pm:
Thank you very much Very glad you enjoyed

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