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Journey of Adoration - Story Teaser
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Journey of Adoration - Story Teaser He hears the pling of his phone, signaling he has a new message just as he pulls into the parking lot. He put the car into park and checked the message. Room 213. Ok then, he thought.. He was still wrapping his head around this is how she wanted this meeting to happen. They had chatted constantly and there was undeniable chemistry, but to think this is how she wanted their first meeting. Excited and nervous he made his way into the chain motel until he got to the door. Running his fingers through his hair and taking a deep breath he collects himself and knocks on the door. They had never met in person before, yet somehow she trusted him. This is what she wanted, what she had asked for. The depth of his blue eyes, the sincerity of the sweetness he countlessly showered upon her when they chatted made her feel so safe and accepted. The there was a natural easy way they could talk about anything. His teasing text meant to illicit naughty desires during the work day where torture she found herself looking forward to. “Take off your shirt.” She quickly complied to the emotionless monotone command while trying to subdue the jolt of sexual excitement that suddenly sparked through her. Somehow they naturally ignited each other’s desires. They shared a chemistry and yearning long before this first meeting. She had told him what she wanted tonight and deep down knew he would stop if she simply said the word. He made her feel special, he made her feel sexy, when ever they talked. When they talked, he shared how she turned him on which seemed to cause her fantasies to flash flood her mind. Tonight was going to be one of those fantasies. She watched his gaze cling to her every curve like humidity on a hot July day. “Come here” he commanded. His voice deeper than normal, resonated within her as she took the two small steps to him. The edge in his voice cut into her like a scalpel. A slow surgical incision that relieved the building pressure of her trepidation and desire. Her eyes scanned over him trying to gauge him. The slight pang of insecurity whispered in the back of her mind that somehow he was disappointed, that all those chats made it so the fantasy of being together made the reality a let down. The silence of the hotel room was deafening. Resting his index finger under her chin, he lifter her gaze until it met his. He held his finger under her chin for a moment, to tell her with no word, she was to stay within his eyes. She fell deep into the color of his eyes. The intensity of the raw intimacy of looking so deeply into him and him into her should have been unnerving. Instead, she could feel her body relax, and the rest of the world disappeared till all that remained was what she saw inside those blue eyes. She couldn’t help but shut her eyes and melt into his fingers as she felt the back of his fingers run down her cheek. His hand cradled her face and she found herself leaning into his touch. She opened her eyes to find his gaze never wavered from her. His hand slide down the side of her neck. She watched him see her through his touch. He rests his hands upon her shoulders.She lost herself inside the pools of blue looking at her as his hands slid down her arms like water. His fingertips learning the feel of her skin as they slid back up her arms. Sliding two fingers under each bra strap he slid his fingers down her skin, over the slope of her breasts and following the hem of the bra. As his fingers slid out from the bra, his thumbs barely grazed the fabric. Up and over her breasts his thumbs ran. His eyes studying hers as his thumbs ran back up over her bra. Her nipples starting to harden. Gently back and forth his thumbs went. Each stroke encouraging her nipples to try and poke through the fabric of her bra. “So this is what you want is it? Tell me again exactly what you wanted.” he asks as one of his thumbs gently flicks her nipple. Her mouth starts to open, and even though they had chatted about this numerous times, she pauses uncertain to say the words. She slowly drops her gaze only to feel his finger under her chin. He gently lifts her gaze until it meets his again. “Hey” The corner of his mouth curls up slightly into a friendly smile. “I ask to make sure you understand we can stop at anytime.” His eyes were like a placid lake, so calm and reassuring.His tone was softer and relaxing as if she was snuggling into bed after a long hard day. The back of his fingers, brushed down her cheek. She couldn’t help but close her eyes as she felt the warmth of his tender touch. She felt a warm calming sensation was over her as her shoulders relaxed as the weight of anticipation and expectations fell from her. Slowly opening her eyes, she saw the assertive alpha was, least for right now, this big teddy bear. Feeling her cheeks pull up in a smile she, felt some comfort and relief. His fingers ran through her hair as he returned the smile and tucker her hair behind her ear. He leaned in close, his breath blow gently by her ear like a summer breeze. Then after the pause of two breaths he e. “This is supposed to be about you. What you want, what you desire deep down inside.” His lips were all but kissing her ear they were so close. His voice so low she wondered if he could even hear what he was saying. “I am happy and lucky to be here with you no matter what we do.” She closed her eyes as she felt the warmth of his left hand on the back of her neck holding her close to his whispers. “We both know deep down what you desire. How many times have you told me your inner cum slut has begged to be released. We can stop at anytime. Honestly thats ok, just do what you want. We can stop, just don’t deny yourself.” Sliding his right arm around her waist he pulled her closer still. Her whole body pressed and held to his. She could feel his arousal against her as his words filled her ears. “I don’t normal use words like cumslut or fucktoy, those are you words. I say them for you. I can be anything you need me to be so that you feel free to be you. Say the words and I will stop, say the words and I will continue.” She felt her knees nearly buckle when his teeth gently nibbled her ear. “Be yourself with me” he continued. “Say the words.” His fingers coiled in her hair and pulled her head back gently so his words would fall upon her neck. “Say the words you want to say and don’t want admit. Say them sexy. We are the only ones here.” She couldn’t deny how wet she already was. “I…..I” she stammered to find the words as her nipples ached in need of attention. “I want to be your fucktoy.” In an instant both his hands held her face making her look into his eyes. “Then that’s what I will make you.” This is the "teaser" i mentioned in my post. Not used to writing stories in this format so please any feedback, thoughts, pointers you may have please do share (only way I get better) Like my other stories here this is af first draft so please forgive grammer/spelling errors (though you are more than welcome to point them out  )I struggled with the whole first person / third person viewpoint with this story so if you think it needs to be more character driven please let me know. Thank you. |
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My arousal is too high to comment on any grammar or spellings. Very well done. I will come back and read this again in a bit. You did a great job from my stand point. Were you reading my mind ???
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Very nice justpervin. 
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Am glad you enjoyed and that it's ok. Not used to writing like that so been a bit nervous that it was going to come off bland or poorly. Thank you 
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